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Lantern #8

Macro guy

Macro guy

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  • FUJIFILM X-E2
  • 35mm
  • 1/4000s
  • ISO 200


Once again, I submit my work for critique. I think it's important to keep this going. Feedback is essential for us to grow as photographers. Tell me what you think about this shot, tell me what you like and dislike about it and tell me why. How could I have made it better?
 
Too much bottom. The picture is busy. Lamps up and ocean and railing below, which seems to throw the balance off.
 
Looking closer, I don't know that corralling the lamp and tree is an improvement. A lot of blur anyway. Maybe the railing helps dissolve that.
 
Thanks for your feedback. I felt the railing grounded the image and it was needed to stop the bleed off the frame. I'm not sure if the image works without it.
 
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